“老师说我的用词太简单、不够academic。”
“明明意思写到了，但看起来就像中学作文。”
“总是用very、a lot、things，感觉整篇文风很low。”
“有没有现成的替换词表？”
是的，词汇等级直接影响Essay的专业感与说服力。
尤其是英国、美国、澳洲高校老师非常看重“是否具备academic tone”。
本篇就为你整理常见低阶词汇的升级版替换清单，分门别类，附加句式结构建议，助你写出更有逻辑和力量的Essay。
| 原词 | 建议替换词 | 示例句 |
|---|---|---|
| a lot of | numerous, a great number of, a considerable amount of | A lot of → Numerous studies show… |
| very | extremely, significantly, remarkably | very important → extremely significant |
| good | beneficial, effective, advantageous | good result → effective outcome |
| bad | detrimental, ineffective, problematic | bad impact → detrimental effect |
| thing | factor, element, variable, aspect | one thing → one key aspect |
| people | individuals, participants, citizens | people think → many individuals believe |
| big | substantial, significant, major | big change → significant shift |
| small | minor, limited, minimal | small impact → minimal influence |
| help | assist, support, facilitate | help students → facilitate student learning |
| show | demonstrate, reveal, indicate | data shows → data indicates |
| 基础动词 | 高级动词 | 示例 |
|---|---|---|
| make | construct, establish, formulate | make a plan → formulate a strategy |
| get | obtain, acquire, receive | get data → acquire data |
| give | provide, deliver, offer | give help → provide assistance |
| use | utilize, employ, adopt | use method → adopt an approach |
| need | require, necessitate | need attention → require immediate action |
| say | argue, claim, assert, state | say that… → argue that… |
| 常见连接词 | 学术连接词 | 用法示例 |
|---|---|---|
| and | moreover, in addition, furthermore | A and B → A. Moreover, B. |
| but | however, nevertheless, on the other hand | It’s useful, but… → It is useful. However… |
| so | therefore, thus, consequently | It is wrong, so… → It is flawed. Therefore… |
| because | due to, owing to, as a result of | Because X… → Due to X… |
📌 小贴士：用副词代替并列连接词（and/but/so）能让句子更高级！
| 基础句型 | 高级句型改写 |
|---|---|
| Many people think X. | It is widely believed that X. |
| This is a big problem. | This issue poses significant challenges. |
| A is better than B. | A demonstrates greater advantages over B. |
| I think that... | It can be argued that... / From an analytical perspective... |
| X shows Y. | X provides evidence to support Y. |
| 场景 | 基础词 | 替换建议 |
|---|---|---|
| 引出观点 | I think / I believe | It is suggested / It is widely accepted |
| 结论段 | In conclusion | To summarize / Overall / In summary |
| 举例子 | for example | for instance / such as / namely |
| 强调观点 | very important | highly significant / of critical importance |
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