“我的老师说我语言太简单,用词太重复。”
“总是用Firstly, Secondly, In conclusion,有没有更高阶的?”
“如何让文章过渡自然,逻辑通顺?”
“有没有连接词分类总结可以直接套用?”
连接词(Linking Words / Transition Signals)是Essay得分的重要加分项。它们让你的段落过渡更自然、论证结构更清晰,也能展示语言多样性和写作能力。
📌 在Academic Writing中,连接词主要用于:
段落之间的过渡(Paragraph transition)
句子内部逻辑串联(Cause-effect, contrast, addition等)
提升语言多样性,避免重复单词
展示批判性逻辑与思维深度
连接词少或滥用,都会影响你的Coherence(连贯性)和Lexical Resource(词汇能力)评分。
| 常见表达 | 替换建议 |
|---|---|
| and | as well as, in addition to, furthermore |
| also | moreover, what's more, additionally |
📌 模板句:
In addition to financial concerns, cultural factors also play a significant role.
Furthermore, these policies have failed to address the root cause.
| 常见表达 | 替换建议 |
|---|---|
| because | since, as, due to, owing to |
| so | therefore, as a result, thus, consequently |
📌 模板句:
Due to rising tuition fees, many students struggle financially.
As a result, dropout rates have significantly increased.
| 常见表达 | 替换建议 |
|---|---|
| but | however, yet, nevertheless, nonetheless |
| although | even though, whereas, while |
📌 模板句:
While online learning offers flexibility, it lacks face-to-face interaction.
Nevertheless, this method remains popular among working adults.
| 常见表达 | 替换建议 |
|---|---|
| for example | for instance, such as, to illustrate |
| like | including, namely (更正式) |
📌 模板句:
Many Asian countries, such as Japan and South Korea, face demographic challenges.
To illustrate, China's population aged 65+ grew by 20% in the last decade.
| 常见表达 | 替换建议 |
|---|---|
| on the other hand | in contrast, by comparison |
| whereas | while, although, conversely |
📌 模板句:
Urban areas are densely populated. In contrast, rural regions often face depopulation.
While A focuses on economic growth, B emphasizes sustainability.
| 常见表达 | 替换建议 |
|---|---|
| indeed | in fact, notably, significantly |
| especially | particularly, above all, importantly |
📌 模板句:
Notably, this reform was introduced only after public protest.
Importantly, this study focuses on underrepresented communities.
| 常见表达 | 替换建议 |
|---|---|
| first | firstly, to begin with, initially |
| then | subsequently, afterwards, next |
| finally | ultimately, eventually, in conclusion |
📌 模板句:
Initially, the program showed promise. However, it eventually failed due to poor execution.
| 常见表达 | 替换建议 |
|---|---|
| in conclusion | to sum up, overall, in brief, in summary |
| so | therefore, all things considered |
📌 模板句:
To sum up, the data supports the hypothesis.
Overall, online education is here to stay despite its limitations.
| 常见表达 | 替换建议 |
|---|---|
| if | provided that, on condition that, unless |
| whether or not | regardless of, depending on |
📌 模板句:
Students can retake the course provided that they meet attendance requirements.
This policy applies regardless of income level.
| 常见表达 | 替换建议 |
|---|---|
| to | in order to, so that, with the aim of |
| for the purpose of | with a view to |
📌 模板句:
This measure was implemented in order to reduce energy consumption.
The organization was founded with the aim of supporting refugees.
✅ 每段使用1–2个恰当连接词,不可堆砌
✅ 多样化表达,避免整篇都是also, but, so
✅ 区分formal/informal表达(如don’t用“like”)
✅ 精准选词,确保逻辑关系成立
📌 小贴士:写完Essay后,用Ctrl+F检查“and”、“also”、“because”等词是否出现过多,进行替换。
高分段落逻辑梳理与连接词优化
重写文章以提升语言多样性与表达力
教你如何建立连接词词库,考试写作提分
提供Academic Phrasebank高频句型模板
Grammarly语法评分+人工润色并讲解修改原因